The diagram below shows the production and processing of milk production for commercial sale. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The charts illustrate the
process
of producing milk
to make usable products.
Overall
, the process
includes 5 main steps, starting with milking and containing in refrigeration storage and concluding with packaging and delivering to supermarkets and shops to be received by customers.
At the first stage
of the process
, cows are fed to grow up and get a standard quality then
it will be taken into the process
. Next,
milk
is milked from cows before being stored in storage. Subsequently
, milk
will be delivered to the Dairy by milk
tanker daily. First stage, milk
will be processed in many steps in the factory. At the same time, milk
is processed in this
step, and some products including cheese, cream, and butter will be made. Then
, it will be pasteurized and packaged. Final step, all the products made with milk
will be taken to supermarkets and shops to be used.Submitted by k2englishcenter on
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