The maps illustrate the changes from 1986 to the present day in town of Denham.

The maps illustrate the changes from 1986 to the present day in town of Denham.
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The maps show how the
town
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of Denham looked in 1986 and after the site development. The general overview is that at present, The
town
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has been changing from a rural field for farming into an accommodation area. It can be seen that, in 1986, Denham was occupied by farmlands, located in both the north and the south of the
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,
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the river.
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, there is an enormous garden in the middle of the
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with a large house. In the
town
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, there are some public facilities
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as shops, a post office and a primary school, connected by a road crossed from the south to the north, crossing the river with the bridge at the top of the map. Moving on to the current layout of Denham, it is apparent that farmlands disappeared, replaced with houses distributed over the
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.
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, the gardens and a large house were turned into a retirement home, and the primary school was expanded.
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, the road was extended, connecting every habitat together.
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