The table shows information and prediction regarding the change in the percentage of population aged 65 years and above in three countries.
The table illustrates the data of the population proportion who are more than or equal to 65 years old in three different countries in 1988,
2000
and the projection for 2030.
The general overview is that, over the years, every country has increased the percentages of the population. Correct word choice
and 2000
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, Germany
has always responsible
for the highest percentages ofAdd a missing verb
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poeple
aged 65 or above throughout the time.
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According to
the table, it can be seen that Germany
took the major part of the ratio of the
people aged 65 or above, accounting for 20.45%, followed by Canada and the UK with the figures being 16.32% and 14.23% respectively in 1988. Moving on to Correct article usage
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Germany
that had the highest percentages over the rest, increasing to 25.32%. Whereas
, Canada occupied 20.67% and the UK was responsible for 14.89% of the people aged more than or equal 65
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Additionally
, according to
the forecast for 2030, Germany
still be in the first with a figure of 30.42%. Canada and the UK will take the second the last
place with the figures being 26.35% and 20.35% of the population.Submitted by pnakasont on
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