The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows how UK
children
aged between 11 and 16 years old went to school in one particular year.
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Overall
, most 11-to 16-year-old Linking Words
children
in the UK opted to walk or cycle for journeys to school under 2 miles, Use synonyms
whereas
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buses
were the predominant choice for longer distances.
For journeys less than 1 mile, walking was overwhelmingly popular, as 90% of Use synonyms
children
aged 11 to 16 chose to do so, which was 40% higher than that of cycling. Use synonyms
Cars
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buses
were less common, with less than 10% of Use synonyms
children
using forms of transport. Meanwhile, the majority of students travelling between 1 and 2 miles to school chose to go by bicycle (75%) and on foot (60%), Use synonyms
while
the figures for Linking Words
cars
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buses
were considerably lower, at 20% and 10%, respectively.
In the 2 to 5-mile category, Use synonyms
buses
topped the list at 50%, followed closely by bicycles at 47%. Use synonyms
Cars
and walking were chosen less often, accounting for approximately 31% and 25%, in that order. For distances over 5 miles, Use synonyms
buses
remained the top choice,at 70%, compared to 21% for Use synonyms
cars
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while
no data was recorded for walking and cycling.Linking Words
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