You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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A glance at the provided reveals the percentage of adult male smokers among seven countries (namely, Armenia, Egypt,
Lebanon
, Bangladesh, Cuba, Mexico and Australia) Use synonyms
as well as
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world
average in two time periods.
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Overall
, it is evident that, over the period, there was a decline in the number of Linking Words
men
smokers in most countries; Correct your spelling
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however
, greater numbers of men in Egypt and Linking Words
Lebanon
smoked in 2015.
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While
slightly over 40 per Linking Words
cent
of the Use synonyms
world
's male citizens smoked, it is evident from the information provided that those who lived in Armenia, Bangladesh and Cuba were more likely to smoke than other nations. Armenia and Bangladesh had by far the highest percentage among all nations, with over 60 per Use synonyms
cent
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smoked
. Third in terms of the smoking population, meanwhile, was Cuba. Approximately 53 per Wrong verb form
smoking
cent
of their male population smoked during the year in question. In stark contrast, the smoking rates in Egypt, Use synonyms
Lebanon
, Mexico and Australia were below the Use synonyms
world
's level.
In 2015, the percentage of Egyptian and Use synonyms
Lebanon
male smokers, surprisingly, had greatly increased by 15 per Use synonyms
cent
and 10 per Use synonyms
cent
respectively and exceeded the Use synonyms
world
's medium. It is interesting to note that, Use synonyms
although
there was a declining trend for other nations, Linking Words
as well as
the Linking Words
world
's ratio which dropped to 35 per Use synonyms
cent
, most of their figures were, still, over the Use synonyms
world
's one by 5 to 15 per Use synonyms
cent
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In contrast
, Mexico and Australia's numbers were lower than the Linking Words
world
's figures.Use synonyms
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