The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in Europe country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in Europe country between 1979 and 2004.
The line graph illustrates the number of
grams
per
person
per week who ate fish, chicken, lamb and
beef
in Europe between 1979 and 2004.
Overall
, it can be seen that all kinds of meat were fluctuated.
Furthermore
, the consumption of
beef
, lamb and fish decreased over the 25-year period,
while
people who eat chicken in
grams
increased. On the one hand, the number of citizens who ate chicken per
person
in a week was around 140
grams
in 1979 and hit a peak at approximately 250
grams
then
slightly fell to roughly 245
grams
for one
person
per week in 2004.
On the other hand
, People who ate
beef
and lamp fluctuations began at merely 220 and 150
grams
in 1979;
moreover
, the
beef
and lamp declined of the citizens of Europe that ate these two kinds of meat to about 100 and 50
grams
, respectively, for 7 days in 2004.
In addition
, the number of people who ate fish was stay still at around 50
grams
per
person
.
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