The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The maps given
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the current condition and development plan of industry districts in Norbition
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. Noticeably, in the future, all the factories in the industrial area will be demolished and converted into
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housing complexes with several buildings surrounding them. Unlike the current condition that only consists of factories, the future site is planned to have shops and a medical centre to support the needs of the residents, as can be seen in the entrance from the main road.
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, to cater for the needs of families with kids, the new site will provide a playground and school, in the eastern side of the area. In both maps, the facade of streets will be nearly will nearly the same, but extended by another two roads for more
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residencies. One is located in the west part of the area, the nearest one to the town. The other road expansion will be across the river, next to the farmland.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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