The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The given map illustrates how the Pacific Railway Station has changed from 1988 to now.
Overall
, all the main facilities observed an expansion in that area and some places have been replaced to another position. In 1988, there was just a single platform for train parking and
repairing
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repair
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, and a toilet area was next to
that
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the
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rails on the left.
After around
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Around
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35 years later,
this
station has an extension in train platforms, which is nearly double the size of the platforms than it was in the past.
In addition
, the toilets have now disappeared and replaced with a range of service places, containing 2 shops and a restaurant. At the bottom of the station, there used to be a coffee shop, a shop and
also
, a ticket office, which provided services for customers when they waited for the train. Currently, there is an establishment, which replaces a shop with a supermarket at the left corner.
Additionally
, the ticket office is now twice
Rephrase
as larger
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larger
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large
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than
Correct word choice
as
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it was in 1988 so as to serve more travellers and let them enjoy the journey comfortably.
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