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The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions.
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The pie charts illustrate the amount of woodlands
in
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on
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 five continents including South
America
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, Africa, Asia, Europe and North
America
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that Africa
belong
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 the widest forest though its logging industry is just responsible for 9% of
timber
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.
According to
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 the data, South
America
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 owns 16% of
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the world's
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world's
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the world's
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 forest
while
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producing
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produces
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producing
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 23% of
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the world's
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world's
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the world's
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timber
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.
Also
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,
Northe
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North
America
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 has 25% of tree plantation across the globe but,
unfortunatelly
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unfortunately
, is the biggest
timber
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 producer with 30% followed by Europe which
takes
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account
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 for 20%
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timber
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of timber
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 making
while
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 it just has 18% wood.
On the other hand
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, Africa
occupied
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occupies
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 27%
the
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of the
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 earth's
plantation
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plantations
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 and makes 9% global's
timber
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. Asia
has14
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has 14
%
worldwide's
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worldwide
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 jungles and 18% of
timber
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 as well.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, timber with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • comparative analysis
  • forest distribution
  • global regions
  • percentage share
  • forested areas
  • ecological significance
  • relative density
  • regional distribution
  • topography
  • human activities
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