The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions.
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in
five continents including South Change preposition
on
America
, Africa, Asia, Europe and North America
. Overall
, it can be seen that Africa belong
the widest forest though its logging industry is just responsible for 9% of Verb problem
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timber
.
According to
the data, South America
owns 16% of Correct article usage
the world's
world's
forest Correct article usage
the world's
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producing
produces
23% of Wrong verb form
producing
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the world's
world's
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the world's
timber
. Also
, Northe
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North
America
has 25% of tree plantation across the globe but, unfortunatelly
, is the biggest Correct your spelling
unfortunately
timber
producer with 30% followed by Europe which takes
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account
for 20% Correct subject-verb agreement
accounts
timber
making Change preposition
of timber
while
it just has 18% wood.
On the other hand
, Africa occupied
27% Wrong verb form
occupies
the
earth's Change preposition
of the
plantation
and makes 9% global's Fix the agreement mistake
plantations
timber
. Asia has14
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worldwide
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