The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions.
The pie charts illustrate the amount of woodlands
in
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five continents including South
America
, Africa, Asia, Europe and North
America
.
Overall
, it can be seen that Africa
belong
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the widest forest though its logging industry is just responsible for 9% of
timber
.
According to
the data, South
America
owns 16% of
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the world's
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world's
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forest
while
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produces
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23% of
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world's
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timber
.
Also
,
Northe
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North
America
has 25% of tree plantation across the globe but,
unfortunatelly
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unfortunately
, is the biggest
timber
producer with 30% followed by Europe which
takes
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account
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for 20%
timber
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of timber
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making
while
it just has 18% wood.
On the other hand
, Africa
occupied
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27%
the
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earth's
plantation
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plantations
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and makes 9% global's
timber
. Asia
has14
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has 14
%
worldwide's
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jungles and 18% of
timber
as well.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, timber with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • comparative analysis
  • forest distribution
  • global regions
  • percentage share
  • forested areas
  • ecological significance
  • relative density
  • regional distribution
  • topography
  • human activities
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