You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given
line
chart
illisturet that
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illustrates
how
much
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many
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goods
carried
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were carried
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by
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in
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million
tonnes
in British from 1978 to 2002
according to
four different
type
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types
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of transportation. Looking from an
overall
perspectives
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perspective
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, It is readily
apperent
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apparent
that the road
line
was not only in the beginning the highest but
also
at the end
of the period almost 70 and 90
million
tonnes
respectively. It is observed that the total qualitifes of goods transported by road
line
went up and down
untill
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until
in
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apply
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1990 and it was stable between 1990 and 1994
then
it
significiantly
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significantly
increased to almost 90
million
tonnes
. It can be seen that
popularity
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the popularity
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of
water
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the water
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and rail
line
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lines
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was exactly
same
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the same
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from 1975 to 1979
by
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with
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40
million
tonnes
. After that
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the rail
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rail
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the rail
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line
followed by
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fluctuation
fluctuaciton
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fluctuation
and it was stable after 1998.
However
, unlike
rail
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the rail
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line
, after 1974,
water
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the water
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line
changed slightly near to 10
million
tonnes
untill
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until
1997 and rose to
higher
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more
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than 60
million
tonnes
in 2002.
Moreover
, the pipeline was the lowest in the given period, even
it
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though it
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increased significantly between 1975 and 1982.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words line, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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