You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. You should write at least 150 words.

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The given

line

chart

illisturet that

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illustrates

how

much

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many

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goods

carried

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were carried

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million

tonnes

in British from 1978 to 2002

according to

four different

type

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types

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of transportation. Looking from an

overall

perspectives

Correct the article-noun agreement

perspective

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, It is readily

apperent

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apparent

that the road

line

was not only in the beginning the highest but

also

at the end

of the period almost 70 and 90

million

tonnes

respectively. It is observed that the total qualitifes of goods transported by road

line

went up and down

untill

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until

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apply

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1990 and it was stable between 1990 and 1994

then

significiantly

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significantly

increased to almost 90

million

tonnes

. It can be seen that

popularity

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the popularity

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water

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the water

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and rail

line

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lines

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was exactly

same

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the same

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from 1975 to 1979

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with

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million

tonnes

. After that

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the rail

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rail

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the rail

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line

followed by

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fluctuation

fluctuaciton

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fluctuation

and it was stable after 1998.

However

, unlike

rail

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the rail

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line

, after 1974,

water

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the water

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line

changed slightly near to 10

million

tonnes

untill

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until

1997 and rose to

higher

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than 60

million

tonnes

in 2002.

Moreover

, the pipeline was the lowest in the given period, even

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though it

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increased significantly between 1975 and 1982.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, million, tonnes with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

179 words

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