The line chart below gives information about the percentage of female members of parliament in European countries (2000 – 2012)

The line chart below gives information about the percentage of female members of parliament in European countries (2000 – 2012)
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The line graph illustrates the percentage of females elected in
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in 5 European countries over a 12-year period from 2000 to 2012.
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, the proportion of female members of
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in these countries saw upward trends, with the UK witnessing the most dramatic rise.
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the UK increased sharply, it consistently had the lowest figures throughout the period. As can be seen
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the chart, the percentage of positions in
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held by women in Germany started at about 34%, after which it saw a gradual rise to 36% in 2012. Similar changes, but to greater extents, were seen in the figures for Italy and the UK, which grew from 26% to almost 40% and from 4% to around 27% respectively.
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, approximately 25% of members in France’s
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were women, with a subsequent jump to reach a peak of around 37% in 2004 and a final increase from 30% in 2008 to 32% in 2012. Meanwhile, the figure for Belgium increased from 17% in 2000 to 28% in 2000 and levelled off towards the end of the period.
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