The table below shows the result of a survey asked 6800 Scottish (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
rate
of cultural activities
that 6800 people
over 16 years old in Scotland have participated in for the past 12 months. Overall
, any performance
including dancing, singing, playing music tools and acting was the most popular while
computer-based activities
were the least. The largest people
of people
from 16 to 24 had experienced any performance
, visual arts, writing and computer activities
whereas
crafts and cultural purchases were favoured most by those between 45 and 74.
Starting with the popular activities
, any performance
shared the largest with 22% for all aged 16 and over, of which the youngest group from 16 to 24 accounted for the largest with 35%, followed by the groups of 25 to 44 and 45 and 74. Visual arts followed a similar pattern of performance
although
the percentages of all age groups were slightly lower. Crafts and cultural purchases were also
one of the favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
activities
that Scottish all aged 16 and over enjoyed with 19% and 16% respectively. While
the rate
of the former was a little higher than that of the latter for 45 to 74 people
, both age groups of 16 to 24 and 25 to 44 shared the same rate
with
11% and 17% respectively.
Turning to the rest of the cultural Change preposition
of
activities
, the proportions of writing and computer-based activities
for all aged over 16 were below 10%. In addition
, the percentage of those between 24 and 44 tended to prefer computer-based activities
more to writing with
9% and 6% respectively Change preposition
at
while
the same rate
of people
from 45 to 74 participated in them with 5%. Regarding the percentage of those between 16 and 24, writing is more popular than computers with 17% and 10%.Submitted by mizuho on
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