The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.

The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.
The line graph illustrates, the price of various mobile contracts including(
domo
, Lex, Sim TX, and Alpha) in European nations from January to September 2002. The units were measured in
euros
.
Overall
, there was a rise in each contract except six tx, which showed a decreasing
trend
.
However
, Alpha showed an upward
trend
and its popularity increased suddenly
at the end
.
Whereas
,
Domo
showed a steady decrease at the final stage.
To begin
with, Alpha at the initial stage began with the lowest cost which was about 5
euros
this
amount remained unchanged up to February
after
this
the amount showed a slight increase.
Furthermore
,
this
trend
plummeted in
June
and reached the value of 5
euros
again but after
June
the graph showed a sudden rise and the value touched a price of more than 10
euros
but it increased more in September to about 25
euros
.
In addition
, lex and
domo
also
showed a rise but in the end, the rate of
domo
decreased slightly.
In contrast
, sim tx showed a little variation from April to
June
while
showing an upward
trend
whereas
from
June
it suddenly fell from 13
euros
to 10
euros
. And onwards reached to the lowest value in September about up to 8
euros
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words domo, euros, trend, june with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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