You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.  The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. ielts-academic-task-1-coffee-shop-sales Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

 The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

ielts-academic-task-1-coffee-shop-sales

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given table indicates how much money was made by a café in a departmental building on a usual
day
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. A glance at the table reveals that
coffee
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is the most popular drink in dedicated time.
However
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,people did not prefer to drink
tea
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in
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at
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the
Remove the article
apply
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all
time
Fix the agreement mistake
times
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of
a
Correct article usage
the
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day
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.
Also
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,the majority of folk
tent
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tend
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to drink
coffee
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and
tea
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in the morning and eat pastries
in
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at
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this
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time of
day
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. From 7:30 to 10:30 the average of selling for
coffee
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and
tea
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is $265 and $275,respectively.
Following
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this
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,at
noon
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the amount of sale drops at $185 between 10:30 and 2:30.
Similarly
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,in the early morning drinking
tea
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is as interested as
coffee
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with $110 from 7:30 to 10:30.
Moreover
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,the population choose to have some pastries in the morning and it is the highest amount of selling edible in a whole
day
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.
In contrast
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,most people are into eat sandwiches at
noon
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an after
noon
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and the amount of sale for sandwiches at 10:30 to 2:30 is $200 and in the evening(5:30 to 8:30) is $100.
In addition
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drinking
tea
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at
noon
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is the least popular edible in all
day
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words day, coffee, tea, noon with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • time slots
  • weekday
  • peak hours
  • trends
  • patterns
  • product categories
  • sales volume
  • morning rush
  • lunchtime
  • afternoon
  • evening
  • popular items
  • total sales
  • comparative analysis
  • sales trends
  • sales distribution
  • highlight
  • potential reasons
  • noteworthy
  • noticeable peaks
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