The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following pictures illustrate the transformation of a public
park
, named Grange
Park
, within a 124-year time span. It is known that it was established in 1920.
Overall
, the
park
today has been modernized with the addition of some buildings. Meanwhile, the entrance has remained the same. In detail, two
seats
were put on the left side of the
park
in 1920, but now it has been replaced with an amphitheatre where most of the concerts are held in there. The
seats
were moved to the centre of Grange
Park
. In 1920, in front of the
seats
, there were two rose gardens, one for each side.
However
, the developer
decides
Wrong verb form
decided
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to have only one garden now, which is why, one of the rose gardens was demolished. The stage for musicians is
also
transformed into the amphitheatre because it needs a large space.
In addition
, in the middle of the
park
, there was a fountain but now the
seats
have been moved there,
surround
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surrounding
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the rose garden.
Moreover
, in the right corner of the
park
, the pond is changed to a children's play area and in front of it there is a cafe.
On the other hand
, the glasshouse that used to be built next to the entrance is now replaced with a water feature.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, seats with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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