The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the modifications that have taken place in Grange Park between 1920 and the present day.
Overall
, it is clear that
everything has changed except two entrances to Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street and the top-left rose garden
.
To begin
with, the middle fountain was replaced by a square rose garden
surrounded by a new seat on each side. On the left-hand side of the map, a new gigantic amphitheatre for concerts was built instead
of an old stage for musicians, besides
the bottom garden
of roses and four benches were moved out.
Additionally
, looking on the right-hand side of the park, an old garden
and a pond were obliterated and two new facilities sprung up comprising a cafe and a children
playground. A long glasshouse turned into a beautiful and enormous water feature. Change noun form
children's
Lastly
, seats were disappeared and a new entrance for underground parking lots set in.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words garden with synonyms.
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