The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in 5 European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in 5 European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables demonstrate how much Fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana was sold in five distinct European areas in the years 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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it is clear that
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while
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the UK had the highest rate of
sales
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fluctuation regarding coffee, the same figure for bananas is credited to Switzerland. In terms of coffee
sales
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, the UK was the absolute leader in changing
sales
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rate as it went from 1.5
million
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euros
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in 1999 to 20
million
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euros
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in 2004.
moreover
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, Switzerland comes in second place increasing by 3
million
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euros
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, reaching 6
million
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euros
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in 2004. Notably, Denmark faced a slight differentiation and had a mere 0.2
million
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euro accumulation.
furthermore
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,
while
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Belgium witnessed
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0.7
million
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euro increase, the same concept for Sweden went up just 0.2
million
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euros
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. moving on to fairtrade-labelled bananas, Switzerland has the highest place in both years with selling 15 and 47
million
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euros
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in 1999 and 2004, respectively.
additionally
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, the UK, Belgium, and Sweden,
also
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soared considerably with the former one having the highest change of 4.5
million
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euros
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.
however
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, banana
sales
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in Denmark witnessed a decline of 1.1
million
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euros
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and reached 0.9
million
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euros
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in
sales
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in 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, million, euros with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • sales figures
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • substantial rise
  • stable sales
  • modest increase
  • significant increase
  • decline in sales
  • trends
  • comparisons
  • features
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