Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime others however argue that the circumstances of and individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken in to account when deciding on punishment. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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. Some

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that fixed

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for same crimes,

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should have flexible

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the conditions and reasons for committing the

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. Personally, I think that we should notice all factors which are related to crimes.

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outline my opinion. On the one hand, if governments consider the same

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ordinary

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and time for

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of new laws for each criminal.

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criminals to

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again.

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bread should not have

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a car thief that circumstance could lead to more commit

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the

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a useful person for

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of

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equality in different classes of

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To sum up

, I think, maybe

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the same

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crime

could be more affordable but considering motivation and personality for committing a

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the criminal

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in terms of how

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is harmful

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society

could be more effective.