The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of teachers who were in 6 diverse kinds of British schooling during 2010.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
women
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had more teachers than
men
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, with the exception of private training institutes and universities.
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, the biggest disparity between educational systems was in Nursery/ Pre-school where
women
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clearly came out on top. Looking at the figures for nursery/preschool and primary school in
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detail, it is obvious that
women
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outnumbered
men
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at around 90% against 10% in that order. As for Nursery/preschool, there was 97% of female teachers,
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males accounted for 3%, making it the biggest difference. Turning towards the 4 remaining school groups which saw smaller diversity. In terms of secondary school, a lesser percentage of
men
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at 45% in it compared to
women
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at 55%. Regarding private training institutes, there was a dissimilar trend for which the figures stood at 55% for males and 45% for females. As for university, the proportion of
men
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was higher than
women
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at 70% and exactly 30%, respectively. With respect to college where
men
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and
women
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made up a similar rate, at around 50%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational settings
  • percentage
  • representation
  • disparities
  • predominance
  • gender imbalance
  • societal expectations
  • historical roles
  • implications
  • trends
  • gender gap
  • educational outcomes
  • gender stereotypes
  • policies
  • initiatives
  • perceptions
  • effectiveness
  • primary school
  • secondary school
  • nursery
  • university
  • further education
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