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The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Local Catches and Imports of Fresh Fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014.

The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Local Catches and Imports of Fresh Fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014.
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The provided chart depicts the quantity of domestic and external raw fish in Perth
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Australia throughout a 10-year period, spanning from 2004 to 2014.
Overall
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, the local,
imports
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 and total fresh fish experienced an upward trend over the observed time frame.
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, local catches consistently exceeded
imports
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. With regards to the first 6 years, in 2004,
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 of fresh
fishes
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 was recorded at 3142.2 metric
tons
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, including 2677.7 metric
tons
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 for local catches and 464.5 metric
tons
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 for
imports
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. Over the course of 5 years,
total
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 of fishes witnessed a sharp increase, reaching the apex of 8949 metric
tons
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 in 2009. Meanwhile, local fresh fish underwent
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similar patterns to the total, reaching 8136.2 metric
tons
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 in 2008, prior to decreasing to 7844.9 in 2009.
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imports
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fishes
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 displayed some fluctuations, hitting 1104.1 metric
tons
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. Turning to the remaining years, after demonstrating
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considerable growth, the total began to decline to 8035.1 metric
tons
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 in 2010 and continued to significantly decrease to 5814.7 metric
tons
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.
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, local catches moderately went down to 5031.9 metric
tons
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 in 2014.
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