The table below shows how many students of a school in UK chose to take part in four different sports between 2001 and 2011. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features, comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of students participating in four different sports in a school in Great Britain from 2001 to 2011.
Overall
, it is clear that
learners in school are interested in football. Moreover
, the trend of both basketball and running are reversed.
To begin
with, the total students attending soccer in 2001 was 60 and it minimally fluctuated to 65 in 2007 before gradually going up to well under 70 in 2010. A slight drop of
football was seen in the Change preposition
in
last
year
by roughly 2. Furthermore
, a swimming lesson occupied 20 in the first year
and surged to 50 in 2005. It levelled off for one year
and nosedived to 30 in 2008 as well as
unnoticeably declining and arriving at 25 in the last
year
.
Additionally
, the volume of basketball participation started at 55 and continuously escalated to 60 in 2006, besides
it plummeted to 20 in 2008 and hovered at this
level until the end of the record. Finally
, the trajectory of running beginning at approximately 20 in year
one soared to the same number as basketball around the year
2006-2007 and went up to 60 in 2007. It unnoticeably oscillated and arrived at 61 in 2011.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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