The diagram below shows the various stages required to produce coffee products from coffee beans.

The diagram below shows the various stages required to produce coffee products from coffee beans.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the various stages required to produce coffee products from coffee beans.
This
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figure depicts the different levels of manufacturing
coffee
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goods from
coffee
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beans.
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, there are 7 stages from harvesting, sorting, and drying to 3 processing levels in the factory and ultimately delivering and buying by customers. First of all, once per year, gardeners go to harvest the
coffee
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from the
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trees.
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the harvested coffees are sorted by some machines and let dry outside under sunlight for two days. After the drying process, they are carried to the factory to be hulled in the fifth stage
coffee
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is roasted for 10 to 20 minutes by heating in a closed machine.
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the rest of the process, in the sixth level, the
coffee
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beans are prepared to be packed with paper or plastic bags by automatic machine and they are sent by a conveyor to the delivery section. In the delivery part, a man transfers the big packs with a trolley to a van in order to deliver them to different shops. At the
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level, customers buy
this
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product.

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