The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
number
of incoming foreign tourists
in five different countries from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
, in the period shown, The US preserved its domination in terms of receiving international people. However
, France
showed a more dramatic increase over 15 years. Furthermore
, other countries experienced a gradual increase in the number
of foreign tourist arrivals, but much lower than The US and France
.
In 1995, 70 million
visitors
from other countries decided to visit The US, which was more than two times greater than that of France
. In the same year, Malaysia hosted 20 million
international tourists
, as compared to France
with 30 million
visitors
. Moreover
, in 1995, an equal number
of visitors
explored Brazil and Egypt, 10 million
people.
Over this
period, the number
of foreign tourists
in The US rose to a peak of 90 million
people and then
a slow drop to less than 90 million
in the last
year. After increasing steadily to 60 million
in 2000, the number
of visitors
rose modestly to 70 million
in 2005 and again showed a more significant increase to approximately 90 million
foreign visitors
in 2010. Meanwhile, the number
of incoming tourists
to Malaysia went up slightly to just over 40 million
in 2010, while
the number
of tourists
was about 10 million
in the last
decade. In addition
, the tourist gap between Egypt and Brazil was increasingly wider and Egypt hosted about 20 million
foreign visitors
in 2010, while
15 million
tourists
went to Brazil in the same year.Submitted by hesam.kord.f on
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