The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
number
of incoming foreign
tourists
in five different countries from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
, in the period shown, The US preserved its domination in terms of receiving international people.
However
,
France
showed a more dramatic increase over 15 years.
Furthermore
, other countries experienced a gradual increase in the
number
of foreign tourist arrivals, but much lower than The US and
France
. In 1995, 70
million
visitors
from other countries decided to visit The US, which was more than two times greater than that of
France
. In the same year, Malaysia hosted 20
million
international
tourists
, as compared to
France
with 30
million
visitors
.
Moreover
, in 1995, an equal
number
of
visitors
explored Brazil and Egypt, 10
million
people. Over
this
period, the
number
of foreign
tourists
in The US rose to a peak of 90
million
people and
then
a slow drop to less than 90
million
in the
last
year. After increasing steadily to 60
million
in 2000, the
number
of
visitors
rose modestly to 70
million
in 2005 and again showed a more significant increase to approximately 90
million
foreign
visitors
in 2010. Meanwhile, the
number
of incoming
tourists
to Malaysia went up slightly to just over 40
million
in 2010,
while
the
number
of
tourists
was about 10
million
in the
last
decade.
In addition
, the tourist gap between Egypt and Brazil was increasingly wider and Egypt hosted about 20
million
foreign
visitors
in 2010,
while
15
million
tourists
went to Brazil in the same year.
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