The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
number
of incoming foreign Use synonyms
tourists
in five different countries from 1995 to 2010.
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Overall
, in the period shown, The US preserved its domination in terms of receiving international people. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
France
showed a more dramatic increase over 15 years. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, other countries experienced a gradual increase in the Linking Words
number
of foreign tourist arrivals, but much lower than The US and Use synonyms
France
.
In 1995, 70 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
visitors
from other countries decided to visit The US, which was more than two times greater than that of Use synonyms
France
. In the same year, Malaysia hosted 20 Use synonyms
million
international Use synonyms
tourists
, as compared to Use synonyms
France
with 30 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
visitors
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, in 1995, an equal Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
explored Brazil and Egypt, 10 Use synonyms
million
people.
Over Use synonyms
this
period, the Linking Words
number
of foreign Use synonyms
tourists
in The US rose to a peak of 90 Use synonyms
million
people and Use synonyms
then
a slow drop to less than 90 Linking Words
million
in the Use synonyms
last
year. After increasing steadily to 60 Linking Words
million
in 2000, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
rose modestly to 70 Use synonyms
million
in 2005 and again showed a more significant increase to approximately 90 Use synonyms
million
foreign Use synonyms
visitors
in 2010. Meanwhile, the Use synonyms
number
of incoming Use synonyms
tourists
to Malaysia went up slightly to just over 40 Use synonyms
million
in 2010, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
was about 10 Use synonyms
million
in the Use synonyms
last
decade. Linking Words
In addition
, the tourist gap between Egypt and Brazil was increasingly wider and Egypt hosted about 20 Linking Words
million
foreign Use synonyms
visitors
in 2010, Use synonyms
while
15 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
tourists
went to Brazil in the same year.Use synonyms
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