“The graph compares the percentage of international students and the percentage of UK learners gaining second class degrees or better at a major UK university.”
The bar chart illustrates the ratio of overseas and British
students
who scored second-class degrees or above at a major UK
university in 2009. Overall
, the highest number
of overseas students
were in Informational technology, while
for the UK
students
were in Sociology. The lowest number
was in International law for international learners and Information technology for UK
students
.
Around 80% of international students
scored the highest average in Information Technology, while
the second highest was for Electrical Engineering at 80%, and about 70% of English Literature, Art History, and Sociology students
scored the second class or better. However
, the International law learners had the lowest rate of almost 50%.
The highest number
of UK
students
who got a second-class degree or above were in Sociology and Art history with 80%. While
students
in International law, English Literature, and Nursing were all just above or below 70%. It is worth mentioning that UK
and International students
in Accountancy were at the same number
of 60%. Furthermore
, Nursing students
from both the UK
and overseas were at the same rate just under 80%.Submitted by nidaa_hamed on
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