The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Illustration depicts how
sugar
Use synonyms
canes
are manufactured into the final product.
The process is Use synonyms
compound
of seven stages in Correct your spelling
composed
creation
of Add an article
the creation
carbohydrate
.
The 7-step cycle begins with cultivating Fix the agreement mistake
carbohydrates
sugar
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canes
and ends with letting already produced Use synonyms
sugar
dry and cool. Use synonyms
This
is achieved by turning Linking Words
canes
into liquid material Use synonyms
that is
turned into Linking Words
sugar
later.
The process starts with letting Use synonyms
sugar
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canes
grow for 12-18 months, which are Use synonyms
then
harvested either by specialized machine or sorted by workers hand. They are Linking Words
then
sent to be crushed and turned into juice. The substance Linking Words
then
goes through a limestone filter to be purified.
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At
step 5, clean juice is put in an evaporator Change preposition
In
that is
heated and ready to transform the liquid into syrup. Afterwards, from the syrup crystals of Linking Words
sugar
are extracted and deposited in the open container to allow them to dry and cool. Use synonyms
Following
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this
, the process of producing Linking Words
sugar
is completed and it commences again.Use synonyms
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