The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008.

The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008.
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The line graph indicates the proportion of visitors to the
cinema
monthly at least one time in a country divided in age brackets from 1978 to 2008.
Overall
, all age groups generally saw an upward trend in
cinema
visitors with the exception of people aged 25 to 34 where it almost remained unchanged throughout the period.
Additionally
, age 14 to 24 was the group with the most people visiting the
cinema
whereas
over 50 was the least. Looking at the graph, regarding people between the ages of 14 to 24, the figure started the period at over 90%, followed by a minor fluctuation within 85% and 90% over 3 decades to end at roughly 88% in 2008. In terms of the 25 to 34 group, exactly 80% went to the
cinema
in 1978, which
then
significantly decreased to 60% by 1988 prior to its major recovery in the next 20 years to around 75% despite a slight decline in the final 5 years. Turning to the remaining statistics, as for
vistitors
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visitors
aged 35 to 49 and above 50, both the percentage stood at over 40% and three fifth of visitors before dipping by 10% in 1988, which later considerably rebounded back to almost 70% and just over a half in the final year, respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • significant
  • peak
  • drop
  • cohort
  • demographic
  • cinema attendance
  • percentage
  • monthly
  • age group
  • contrast
  • decline
  • increase
  • steadily
  • notable
  • highlight
  • period
  • consistent
  • dominant
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