The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The table details the percentage of students who attended specialist
schools
, grammar
schools
, voluntary-controlled
schools
and
community
schools
between 2000 and 2009. The data reveals a clear relationship between the year and four types of
schools
. Turning first of all to the biggest ratio in each year, it can be seen that between 2000 to 2005 voluntary
schools
had the biggest part with 58 per
cent
and 38 per
cent
.
However
, in 2009
community
school attendance rose to 58 per
cent
which is the largest percentage in
this
table. As far as the biggest proportion was concerned, the
community
schools
were the only ones that had elevated. In 2000
community
schools
had the lowest percentage with 12 per
cent
which was the same as specialist
schools
,
by contrast
, in 2009 it raised more than 4 times and ended up at 58 per
cent
. By way of summary, from the information provided in the table, it can be seen that
overall
attendance except for
community
school has a trend to decline.
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