The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates data about the arrivals of international tourists in five countries.
Overall
,it is clear that
the top-ranked country which had more tourists than others is the USA, meanwhile, the lowest result was demonstrated by Brazil.
Firstly
, in 1995, the United States had approximately 70 million
, in the meantime, France
had only 31 million
. Hence
, these two areas were at the top, while
Brazil and Egypt were at the lowest,
because they had equal results of 10 Remove the comma
apply
million
.However
, Malaysia was in third place with 20 million
.
Secondly
, in 2000, France
had a dramatic rise to 60 million
, whereas
, the USA increased slightly to 85 million
. It is obvious that Egypt overtook Brazil with 11 million
. Also
, Malaysia had a noticeable growth to 22 million
. In 2010, Malaysia and Egypt went up significantly to 40 million
, in the meantime, the USA went down dramatically to 82 million
, which means that America and France
had the same results, as France
had a substantial improvement.Submitted by aizered097 on
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