The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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information about international tourist

arravals

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arrivals

in millions for five

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different

countries (USA,France,Malaysia,

Brazil

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, and

Egypt

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) from 1995 to 2010.

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, it can be seen that the largest increase is in

USA

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the USA

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and France

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Brazil

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and

Egypt

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the lowest point . Getting back to the details, in 1995,

tourists

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were a little less than 10

million

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Egypt

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and

Brazil

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then

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they

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to increase steadily till 2010

Brazil

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was just above 10

million

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and

Egypt

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become just under 20

million

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meanwhile the figure of

tourists

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in Malaysia was around 20

million

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in 1995

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and kept increasing

respectivly

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respectively

till it reached about 40

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in 2010.

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the graph

also

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USA

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the USA

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was at the highest point with around 70

million

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tourists

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while

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the number of

tourists

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in France was about 30

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in 1995

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jupm

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jump

to 60

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in 2000, After that they both

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continued

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to go up till they meet in 2010 with around 80

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tourists

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Vocabulary: Replace the words brazil, egypt, tourists, million with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

166 words

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