The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
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The given diagram shows the way in which
bricks
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are made for the building industry.
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, there are seven steps in
process
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the process
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and
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apply
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beginnig
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beginning
with
diggining
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digging
up to
clay
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, finishing with delivering to
bricks
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. First of all, the
clay
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is dug up from the ground by a digger.
This
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clay
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is
then
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placed into a metal grid to break into smaller pieces.
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this
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stage roller aids to metal grid.
After
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this
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, sand and water are added to
clay
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, and
this
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mixter
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mixer
is turned into
bricks
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by
wire
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a wire
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cutter or mould. Following that,
bricks
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are dried by drying oven for 24 - 48 hours.
Subsequently
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, the
bricks
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are sent for
heating
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the heating
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and cooling process.
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, they are heated in a kiln at 200c -800c,
then
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a high temperature at 870c – 1300c, following that, they are placed in a
colling
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cooling
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chamber for 48 – 72 hours. Eventually, the
bricks
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are packed and delivered
for
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to
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their destinations.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, clay, c with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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