The line graph below shows the population size, birth and death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000.

The line graph below shows the population size, birth and death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000.
The statistics demonstrate the fluctuations in Wales and England's three distinct types of rates between 1700 and 2000.
Overall
, the chart demonstrates that all categories, with the exception of the
mortality
rate
, experienced an upward trend.
In addition
, the
birth
rate
in both countries had the highest number of individuals at the outset of the period, but it was supplanted by the population size
rate
by the end. In terms of change, the
birth
rate
and
mortality
rate
were nearly identical when examined in greater detail. The
birth
rate
and death
rate
experienced a significant increase from 30 to 40 and 26 to approximately 38 per 1000 individuals, respectively, between 1700 and 1750.
Subsequently
, they remained constant for the subsequent 50 years.
As a result
, both rates experienced a significant decline, with the
birth
rate
reaching its lowest point at 22 and the
mortality
rate
at 20 per 1,000 people in 1950. The
birth
rate
experienced a significant increase of approximately 34% between 1950 and 2000,
while
the
mortality
rate
remained consistent at 20 per 1,000 individuals. Regarding the remaining statistics, the population size varied between 2 and 10 million from 1700 to 1800.
This
figure experienced a substantial increase over the next 200 years, reaching its peak of approximately 50 million at the conclusion of the period.
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