The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates details about the selling
price
of bananas in four countries( USA, Germany,
France
and Japan).
Overall
, as
it
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shown in the graph
it is clear that
Japan had the largest increase over the period of time. Meanwhile,
France
had the most dramatic drop.
While
Germany and America remained slightly steady.
To begin
with. Between 1994 to 1995,
Bananas
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Banana
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selling
price
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prices
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in Japan increased between 2$ to 2.75$ respectively. After
that
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that,
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the
price
of bananas had a dramatic drop from 1996 to 2001. the selling
price
rose starting from 2002 to 2004. looking at the three other regions.
France
, Germany and America. The three
countries
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countries'
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prices fluctuated over the period of time.
However
,
France
had
an
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downward trend in 2003 by less than 1$.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, france with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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