In the 21st century, more
around the world, especially in developed countries, tend to live in insufficient residences
an overpopulation issue. In my opinion, it is certainly a negative aspect for a few reasons.
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and disadvantages
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urban revolution.
First of all, it
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provides houses for
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areas problem, resulting in a growing number of high-rise buildings nowadays. The
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urbanism development diminishes
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problem of lacking spaces for housing purposes in some countries,
, in Thailand, there
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number of individuals who cannot find
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suitable houses
of numerous alternatives in the high-rise building.
, apartment offers
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and secure environment for their residents, which
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to find in
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located near a busy street.
,
modern lifestyle of living in a limited space seems to impact individual mental health, which is the most
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society today. It generates anxiety and stress to
, especially among young
who live in a squared room, leading to tedious and unproductive
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because there is no space for relaxation or recreational activities,
as gardening or doing
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yoga.
, having more outdoor space is significant in child development as it allows extra activities on the weekend: badminton or picnic;
, it creates not only competence in a child but
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in each family.
In conclusion,
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kind of urbanism, the disadvantages outweigh those advantages in terms of mental health and
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, which are
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vital factors in
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high quality of life.
, the government should focus
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it to improve
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of its citizens.