You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your latter •Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months •Say how your work could be done while you are away •Ask for his/her help in arranging it
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
epistle regarding a humble request of
my transfer from India to Canada for half a year.
Let me put forth my affairs. Change preposition
for
Actually
my wife is suffering from Add a comma
Actually,
deadly
disease Correct article usage
a deadly
about
which Change preposition
apply
about
I would not like to share and keep Change preposition
apply
it
confidential. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Moreover
, we have been moving back and forth from Chandigarh to Delhi for her treatment, in the hope that she would get better. However
, a few days back doctors have
suggested Unnecessary verb
apply
us
Correct pronoun usage
we
to
visit Canada to cure her disease from the roots which might take 6 months.
Even though it would be hard to adjust because of the time difference in both Fix the infinitive
apply
the
countries, I assure you that I will Correct article usage
apply
working
Change the verb form
work
be working
according to
the Indian time while
residing there. As all my work is done through
Change preposition
on
laptop
, I would prefer Add an article
a laptop
the laptop
working
from home. Change the verb form
to work
Thus
, it will help me focus both on work and on my wife’s health.
Although
, it is an extra affair for you, it would kind of you if you could talk to the Hr
team Correct your spelling
HR
for
my transfer. I would Change preposition
about
also
appreciate if
Correct pronoun usage
it if
i
could get a new laptop from the company as my old laptop requires some repair.
Looking forward for a prompt reply.
Change the capitalization
I
Your
sincerely,
DanielCorrect the word
Yours
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suitable writing tone
Avoid overly formal or overly informal phrases; aim for a professional tone.
single idea per paragraph
Use paragraphs effectively; consider separating different points to make the letter clearer.
complete response
Ensure to proofread for small grammatical errors and typos to ensure clarity.
suitable writing tone
Your letter is polite and communicates your request clearly.
complete response
You provided a valid reason for your request and outlined how you plan to manage your work effectively.
logical structure
The letter has a clear opening and closing, making it structured and easy to follow.
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