The chart below shows the percentage of river water inUK rivers that is classified as having good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002.
Contained in the line graph is pertaining to the proportion of river water quality in the UK which
be
good at Correct subject-verb agreement
is
chemical
from 1990 to 2002.
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chemicals
Overall
, it can be seen that the good chemical quality in Scotland
are
always Change the verb form
is
lowest
except from 1998 to 2001. It can be observed that Correct article usage
the lowest
Wales
started at a higher point than Northern Ireland
while
the opposite was true in 2002.
Looking at Wales
and Northern Ireland
in further
details
, it is evident that Fix the agreement mistake
detail
Wales
and Northern Ireland
began at almost 95 per cent
and 85 per cent
respectively. Moreover
, it remained unchanged for the next eight years
and overtook at just over 90 per cent
in 1999. Finally
, Wales
slightly decreased to around 80 per cent
whereas
Northern Ireland
increased and stood at 95 per cent
between 2000 and 2002.
Turning to England
and Scotland
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Scotland's
statistic
, in 1990, the amount of good Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
chemical
in Fix the agreement mistake
chemicals
England
significantly increased in the next six years
and reached a peak at almost 70 per cent
in 1996. After two years
, England
rapidly decreased to 30 per cent
whereas
Scotland
significantly increased and overtook England
at around 60 per cent
in 2000. Finally
, the proportion of good chemical
in Fix the agreement mistake
chemicals
Scotland
went down to almost 40 per cent
while
in England
dramatically went up just
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by just
at
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apply
a
half for the next two Remove the article
apply
years
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