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The graph below shows the popularity of the different fast foods in Britain and the trends in their consumption.

The graph below shows the popularity of the different fast foods in Britain and the trends in their consumption.
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The graph illustrates the changes for hamburgers, fish and chips, and
pizza
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 in Britain from 1970 to 1990.
Overall
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, the consumption of the hamburger and fish and chips increased dramatically,
in contrast
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, the popularity of
pizza
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 decreased in
this
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 period. Fish and chips started at almost 90 and ended with 500 in 20 years which stood as the most demanded fast food in 1990, the fluctuations in
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 period were not the same; the growth was gradual in two decades but suddenly it went up dramatically between 1980 to 1990.
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, it took over
pizza
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 around the year 1983. Hamburger increased by almost 270, from 20 to 290, and it experienced gradual acceleration between the years 1970 to 1985,
however
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, it rose rapidly between 1985 to 1990. At the start,
pizza
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 was most favourite fast food among these three foods but it dropped slowly in
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 period and the initial point was 300 and the endpoint was 1990, it
also
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 was taken over by hamburgers in 1987.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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