The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and

2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and

the charts show how it was distributed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts compare data about the sources of
police
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budget and how it was allocated for 2017 and 2018 in one territory of Great Britain.
Overall
,
it is clear that
National
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the National
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Government shared
out
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a significant majority of
budget
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the budget
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when officers and staff received a large proportion of
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the budget
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as a salary in both years
accordingly
.
Moreover
, there was a rise in expenditure of local taxes and in the devoted
money
for
a
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technology in two years.
According to
the table, the National Government and other sources witnessed a little change by 2,3 £m and 0,5 £m, reaching 177,8
£m
and 38,5
£m
,
while
the capital of local taxes went up
for
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10% in 2018. As is presented in the pie chart, the
money
, in 2018 which was spent
for
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the
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building and transport (17%) remained the same,
whereas
allocated
money
for technology doubled almost reaching 14 million pounds from 8.
In addition
, salaries of officers and staff which
were
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consisted
three
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quarter
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of spent
money
in 2017 decreased to 69% in the next year.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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