The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts compare data about the sources of
police
budget and how it was allocated for 2017 and 2018 in one territory of Great Britain.
Add an article
the police
Overall
, it is clear that
National
Government shared Correct article usage
the National
out
a significant majority of Change preposition
apply
budget
when officers and staff received a large proportion of Correct article usage
the budget
budget
as a salary in both years Correct article usage
the budget
accordingly
. Moreover
, there was a rise in expenditure of local taxes and in the devoted money
for a
technology in two years.
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apply
According to
the table, the National Government and other sources witnessed a little change by 2,3 £m and 0,5 £m, reaching 177,8£m
and 38,5£m
, while
the capital of local taxes went up for
10% in 2018.
As is presented in the pie chart, the Change preposition
by
money
, in 2018 which was spent for
Change preposition
on
the
building and transport (17%) remained the same, Correct article usage
apply
whereas
allocated money
for technology doubled almost reaching 14 million pounds from 8. In addition
, salaries of officers and staff which were
consisted Unnecessary verb
apply
three
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of three
quarter
of spent Fix the agreement mistake
quarters
money
in 2017 decreased to 69% in the next year.Submitted by mr.jailybaev on
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