The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph provides the trend of
British's
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British
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travelers
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travellers
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and
The
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UK
visitors from 1979 to 1999
while
the bar chart
inform
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shows
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the
amount
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number
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of tourists who visited
top
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the top
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5 countries by
British
residents
.
Overall
, what stands
ouy
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out
from the graph is both
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apply
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UK
travelers
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travellers
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and visitors
were
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apply
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increased over two decades and France was the
favorite
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favourite
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region dropped in by
British
peoples
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people
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. Another interesting point is
also
the number of
British
residents
who liked to travel was higher than The
UK
visitor
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visitors
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itselfs
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itself
.
Initially
, in 1979 the percentage of both
peoples
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people
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who visited
to
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apply
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and from The
UK
started almost
in
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apply
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the same
amount
which was
in
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apply
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10
millions
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million
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and slightly more than 10
millions
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million
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populances
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populaces
.
Moreover
, despite both of the
sector
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sectors
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rose
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rising
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steadily, the
amount
of
British
peoples
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people
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who went abroad had
more
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a higher
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percentage from around 20
millions
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million
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in 1984, and keep
climb
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climbed
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dramatically
untill
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until
peaked in 1999 which had just over 50
millions
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million
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British
residents
.
However
, the
amount
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number
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of tourists who visited The
UK
from 1984
moderatelly
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moderately
increased
about
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by
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more than 10
millions
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million people
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peoples
to
reached
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reach
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a high of almost 30
millions
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million
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populates
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apply
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in 1999.
Subsequently
, European
country
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countries
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became the top destination
by
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for
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the
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apply
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British
Residents
in 1999, with France
was
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apply
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about over 10
millions
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million people
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peoples
, and Spain
was
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apply
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slightly less than 10
millions
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million people
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peoples
.
Meanwhile
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Turkey only had a minority
visitors
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of visitors
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from The
UK
was only
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,
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less than 5
millions
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million people
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peoples
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words british, uk, amount, residents, peoples, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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