The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The line graph provides the trend of

British's

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travelers

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and

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visitors from 1979 to 1999

while

the bar chart

inform

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shows

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the

amount

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number

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of tourists who visited

top

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the top

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5 countries by

British

residents

Overall

, what stands

ouy

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out

from the graph is both

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travelers

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and visitors

were

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increased over two decades and France was the

favorite

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region dropped in by

British

peoples

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people

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. Another interesting point is

also

the number of

British

residents

who liked to travel was higher than The

visitor

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visitors

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itselfs

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itself

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, in 1979 the percentage of both

peoples

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people

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who visited

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apply

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and from The

started almost

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the same

amount

which was

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millions

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and slightly more than 10

millions

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populances

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populaces

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, despite both of the

sector

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rose

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steadily, the

amount

British

peoples

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people

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who went abroad had

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a higher

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percentage from around 20

millions

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million

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in 1984, and keep

climb

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dramatically

untill

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until

peaked in 1999 which had just over 50

millions

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British

residents

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, the

amount

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of tourists who visited The

from 1984

moderatelly

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moderately

increased

about

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more than 10

millions

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million people

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peoples

reached

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a high of almost 30

millions

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populates

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in 1999.

Subsequently

, European

country

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countries

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became the top destination

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the

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British

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in 1999, with France

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about over 10

millions

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million people

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peoples

, and Spain

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slightly less than 10

millions

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million people

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peoples

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Turkey only had a minority

visitors

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of visitors

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from The

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less than 5

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million people

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peoples

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Vocabulary: Replace the words british, uk, amount, residents, peoples, millions with synonyms.

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