The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph provides the trend of
British's
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British
travelers
and Change the spelling
travellers
The
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apply
UK
visitors from 1979 to 1999 while
the bar chart inform
the Verb problem
shows
amount
of tourists who visited Change the quantifier
number
top
5 countries by Correct article usage
the top
British
residents
. Overall
, what stands ouy
from the graph is both Correct your spelling
out
The
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apply
UK
travelers
and visitors Change the spelling
travellers
were
increased over two decades and France was the Unnecessary verb
apply
favorite
region dropped in by Change the spelling
favourite
British
peoples
. Another interesting point is Fix the agreement mistake
people
also
the number of British
residents
who liked to travel was higher than The UK
visitor
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visitors
itselfs
.
Correct your spelling
itself
Initially
, in 1979 the percentage of both peoples
who visited Fix the agreement mistake
people
to
and from The Remove the preposition
apply
UK
started almost in
the same Change preposition
apply
amount
which was in
10 Change preposition
apply
millions
and slightly more than 10 Change to singular
million
millions
Change to singular
million
populances
. Correct your spelling
populaces
Moreover
, despite both of the sector
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sectors
rose
steadily, the Wrong verb form
rising
amount
of British
peoples
who went abroad had Fix the agreement mistake
people
more
percentage from around 20 Fix the agreement mistake
a higher
millions
in 1984, and keep Change to singular
million
climb
dramatically Wrong verb form
climbed
untill
peaked in 1999 which had just over 50 Correct your spelling
until
millions
Change to singular
million
British
residents
. However
, the amount
of tourists who visited The Change the quantifier
number
UK
from 1984 moderatelly
increased Correct your spelling
moderately
about
more than 10 Change preposition
by
millions
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million people
peoples
to reached
a high of almost 30 Wrong verb form
reach
millions
Change to singular
million
populates
in 1999.
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apply
Subsequently
, European country
became the top destination Fix the agreement mistake
countries
by
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for
the
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apply
British
Residents
in 1999, with France was
about over 10 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million people
peoples
, and Spain was
slightly less than 10 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million people
peoples
. Meanwhile
Turkey only had a minority Add a comma
Meanwhile,
visitors
from The Change preposition
of visitors
UK
was only
less than 5 Verb problem
,
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million people
peoples
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Vocabulary: Replace the words british, uk, amount, residents, peoples, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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