The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including Local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles.

The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including Local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles.
The line graph displays information about the
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billions
of
minutes
used by the UK telephone calls in three different categories from 1995 to 2002.
Overall
, The largest amount of
minutes
was used by the local-
fixed
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-fixed
lines.
However
, the least was used by the mobiles throughout the entire period of time.
To begin
with, as the chart
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represents
from 1995 the local- fixed lines started with
highest
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of
minutes
by
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roughly
70
bilions
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billion
of
minutes
.
In addition
to that, it continued increasing till the year of 1999 with the use of 90
minutes
.
Then
it started to decrease reaching
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the same level of usage in 2002. For national and international we can clearly see that it was used a bit less than the first category. It rose
thorughout
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throughout
the years starting from 1995 to 2002 by 60 to 65
bilions
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billions
billion
of
minutes
respectively. The mobiles
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the other hand, it was the lowest in 1995 as it
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it wasn't used at all.
moreover
, it started a dramatic jump from the year
of
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1995 to 2002 with the use of 35
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billions
billion
of
minutes
roughly.
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