The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates
honey
Correct article usage
the honey
bee
's lifecycle from Correct article usage
the eggs
eggs
stage to Change the noun form
egg
grown
female Correct article usage
the grown
bee
.
Overall
, it shown
Wrong verb form
shows
that
that the Correct word choice
apply
bee
go
through 5 main Change the verb form
goes
phase
to become Fix the agreement mistake
phases
a
adult female, which takes 34 -36 Change the article
an
days
.
To begin
with, the
Correct article usage
apply
bee
life start
when a queen Change the verb form
starts
bee
lays one or two eggs evey
three Correct your spelling
every
days
, then
Correct word choice
and then
its
Correct pronoun usage
it
start
to hatch after 9-10 Correct subject-verb agreement
starts
days
, within five days
a baby bee
getout
from the egg and grows slightly bigger in the 7th day.
Correct your spelling
gets
Moreover
, the nymph start
a stage where it moults three times Change the verb form
starts
while
growing in 9 days
, after that its
Correct pronoun usage
it
grow
to become a young adult and Correct subject-verb agreement
grows
its
only takes Correct pronoun usage
it
a
4 Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
days
to turn into a mature female bee
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