The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph highlights information about the percentage of households involved in electrical devices
such
as washing machine
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machines
refrigerator
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refrigerators
cleaner
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cleaners
from
1920 and 2019 and the number of hours Change preposition
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spending
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spent
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housework per week.
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Overall
, the graph shows that the percentage of using three devices experienced an upward trend while
the number of hours of houswork
declined per week over the period in question.
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housework
refrigerator
, despite being under 10 per Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cent
in 1920, more and more people became intersted
in using Correct your spelling
interested
it
, which Correct pronoun usage
them
leaded
to a rapid rise over the first 40 years and stood at 90 per Correct your spelling
led
cent
. After reaching 100 per cent
in 1980, the graph remained stable for the rest of the period.
Considering the usage of washing machine
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machines
cleaner
, started at 40 and 30 per Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
cent
in turn, both increased over years
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the years
machine
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machines
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in 1960, having dropped slightly in 1980, and then
rose to just under 70 per cent
in 2019. Meanwhile, vacuum cleaner
experienced a gradual increase from 30 per Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
cent
in 1920 to 100 per cent
in 2000 and levelled off for the next 19 years.
Although
the amount of time that people spent doing housework started at 50 per cent
in 1920, it decreased steadily to 10 per cent
in 2019.Submitted by layakhosroabadi on
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