The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The line chart illustrates how the
cost
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of
copper
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,
nickel
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, and
zinc
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fluctuate
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monthly in 2014.
Overall
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,
Copper
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and
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nickel’s
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nickel
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price
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prices
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decreased,
while
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zinc
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price
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went up.
Nickel
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had the most significant
price
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fluctuations between months. In the first half of 2014, it can be seen that the
cost
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of
nickel
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went down significantly by 9% from January to June,
while
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copper
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and
zinc
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lost less than that (1% for
zinc
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and about 2.5% for
copper
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).
However
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,
nickel
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’s
price
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grew by 2% from 1% in January to 3% in February. In the second half of the year, all the
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cost
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costs
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of these
metal
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metals
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seemed to increase, especially
nickel
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.
Nickel
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’s
price
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changed from -3% to 1% from June to December , except for a 1%
decreased
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from September to October. The
cost
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of
copper
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slightly increased and remained stable compared to the beginning of the year.
Zinc
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’s
price
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has a small loss
about
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0.5% in October, but strongly increase by the end of the year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cost, copper, nickel, zinc, price with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuate" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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