The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates how the
cost
of Use synonyms
copper
, Use synonyms
nickel
, and Use synonyms
zinc
Use synonyms
fluctuate
monthly in 2014. Wrong verb form
fluctuated
Overall
, Linking Words
Copper
and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
nickel’s
Change noun form
nickel
Use synonyms
price
decreased, Fix the agreement mistake
prices
while
Linking Words
zinc
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
price
went up. Fix the agreement mistake
prices
Nickel
had the most significant Use synonyms
price
fluctuations between months.
In the first half of 2014, it can be seen that the Use synonyms
cost
of Use synonyms
nickel
went down significantly by 9% from January to June, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
copper
and Use synonyms
zinc
lost less than that (1% for Use synonyms
zinc
and about 2.5% for Use synonyms
copper
). Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
nickel
’s Use synonyms
price
grew by 2% from 1% in January to 3% in February.
In the second half of the year, all the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
cost
of these Fix the agreement mistake
costs
metal
seemed to increase, especially Fix the agreement mistake
metals
nickel
. Use synonyms
Nickel
’s Use synonyms
price
changed from -3% to 1% from June to December , except for a 1% Use synonyms
decreased
from September to October. The Replace the word
decrease
cost
of Use synonyms
copper
slightly increased and remained stable compared to the beginning of the year. Use synonyms
Zinc
’s Use synonyms
price
has a small loss Use synonyms
about
0.5% in October, but strongly increase by the end of the year.Change preposition
of about
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cost, copper, nickel, zinc, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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