The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates how the
cost
of
copper
,
nickel
, and
zinc
fluctuate
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monthly in 2014.
Overall
,
Copper
and
nickel’s
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nickel
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price
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prices
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decreased,
while
zinc
price
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prices
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went up.
Nickel
had the most significant
price
fluctuations between months. In the first half of 2014, it can be seen that the
cost
of
nickel
went down significantly by 9% from January to June,
while
copper
and
zinc
lost less than that (1% for
zinc
and about 2.5% for
copper
).
However
,
nickel
’s
price
grew by 2% from 1% in January to 3% in February. In the second half of the year, all the
cost
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costs
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of these
metal
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metals
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seemed to increase, especially
nickel
.
Nickel
’s
price
changed from -3% to 1% from June to December , except for a 1%
decreased
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from September to October. The
cost
of
copper
slightly increased and remained stable compared to the beginning of the year.
Zinc
’s
price
has a small loss
about
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0.5% in October, but strongly increase by the end of the year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cost, copper, nickel, zinc, price with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuate" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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