The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates how the
cost
of copper
, nickel
, and zinc
fluctuate
monthly in 2014. Wrong verb form
fluctuated
Overall
, Copper
and nickel’s
Change noun form
nickel
price
decreased, Fix the agreement mistake
prices
while
zinc
price
went up. Fix the agreement mistake
prices
Nickel
had the most significant price
fluctuations between months.
In the first half of 2014, it can be seen that the cost
of nickel
went down significantly by 9% from January to June, while
copper
and zinc
lost less than that (1% for zinc
and about 2.5% for copper
). However
, nickel
’s price
grew by 2% from 1% in January to 3% in February.
In the second half of the year, all the cost
of these Fix the agreement mistake
costs
metal
seemed to increase, especially Fix the agreement mistake
metals
nickel
. Nickel
’s price
changed from -3% to 1% from June to December , except for a 1% decreased
from September to October. The Replace the word
decrease
cost
of copper
slightly increased and remained stable compared to the beginning of the year. Zinc
’s price
has a small loss about
0.5% in October, but strongly increase by the end of the year.Change preposition
of about
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cost, copper, nickel, zinc, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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