The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparison where necessary.
The bar chart compares the information of expenses regarding
France
and the UK
on consumer products for 2010.
Overall
, cars reserved the highest amount
of spending by the UK
and France
, while
in
cameras and perfume, Change preposition
for
France
and the UK
spent little amount
respectively . Moreover
, the UK
used up more money for consumer goods than France
.
In terms of France
, cars were highly demandable for the habitants
, and they consumed exactly 4,00,000 pounds for it,Correct your spelling
inhabitants
while
this
amount
was followed by the expenses of computers. Expenditure for books was 3,00,000 pounds, however
, this
amount
was twofold of cameras'
expense, and for perfume, £ 2,00,000 was expended by the people of Correct article usage
the cameras'
France
.
In concern of UK
, the most significant segment of expenditure was cars, as the expense
was approximately £ 4,50,000 and the consumed Replace the word
expenditure
amount
for book
was around £50,000 less than Fix the agreement mistake
books
car's
Correct article usage
the car's
amount
. Although
the expended money
on Cameras and Computers Verb problem
expenditure
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
were
nearly £3,50,000, the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
amount
of pounds Change the quantifier
number
Change preposition
on
for
perfume was just below Change preposition
on
Change preposition
apply
of
£1,50,000.Change preposition
apply
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