The chart below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time in the year 1982. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the information below.
The table illustrates how both genders males and females spent their
time
in the UK in 1982 Use synonyms
while
being unemployed.
Linking Words
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
in the morning Linking Words
Use synonyms
time
both women and men spent more Add a comma
time,
time
doing activities Use synonyms
while
in the Linking Words
afternoon
they spent less Use synonyms
time
.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, in the morning for males Linking Words
they
searched for jobs with a Correct pronoun usage
apply
percent
of 22, went shopping Change the spelling
per cent
by
20%, did some house chores Change preposition
with
by
19%, and Change preposition
with
for
gardening it was 14%. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, for the remaining Linking Words
activities
it fluctuated between 2 to 9%. Looks like men spent more Add a comma
activities,
time
resting in the Use synonyms
afternoon
, between watching TV and gardening by 14 to 13%. visiting relatives and friends by the same Use synonyms
perecnt
of 12, and the other Correct your spelling
per cent
activites
were less Correct your spelling
activities
higher
than the other.
For the Change the word
high
oppoiste
gender, Women spent their quality Correct your spelling
opposite
time
Use synonyms
foing
housework with a higher percentage in the morning Correct your spelling
doing
going
by
49% and it decreased in the Change preposition
apply
afternoon
to 21%. they shopped in the morning and Use synonyms
on
the Change preposition
in
afternoon
with a slight drop from 26% to 17%, they searched for jobs by 13% and visited families and friends by 17%. Watched TV a bit more in the Use synonyms
afternoon
by 12% and spent some Use synonyms
time
reading by 10%. the rest of their Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
leisure
lesiure
Correct your spelling
leisure activities
activites
it was way less than the othersCorrect your spelling
activities
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, afternoon with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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