The chart below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time in the year 1982. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the information below.

The chart below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time in the year 1982.

Write a report to a university lecturer describing the information below.
The table illustrates how both genders males and females spent their
time
in the UK in 1982
while
being unemployed.
Overall
,
it is clear that
in the morning
time
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both women and men spent more
time
doing activities
while
in the
afternoon
they spent less
time
.
To begin
with, in the morning for males
they
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searched for jobs with a
percent
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of 22, went shopping
by
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with
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20%, did some house chores
by
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with
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19%, and
for
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gardening it was 14%.
Moreover
, for the remaining
activities
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it fluctuated between 2 to 9%. Looks like men spent more
time
resting in the
afternoon
, between watching TV and gardening by 14 to 13%. visiting relatives and friends by the same
perecnt
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per cent
of 12, and the other
activites
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activities
were less
higher
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than the other. For the
oppoiste
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opposite
gender, Women spent their quality
time
foing
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doing
going
housework with a higher percentage in the morning
by
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49% and it decreased in the
afternoon
to 21%. they shopped in the morning and
on
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in
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the
afternoon
with a slight drop from 26% to 17%, they searched for jobs by 13% and visited families and friends by 17%. Watched TV a bit more in the
afternoon
by 12% and spent some
time
reading by 10%. the rest of their
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leisure
lesiure
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leisure activities
activites
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activities
it was way less than the others
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, afternoon with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job hunting
  • housework
  • leisure activities
  • job training
  • pursuing hobbies
  • childcare
  • household chores
  • socializing
  • entertainment
  • educational pursuits
  • evening classes
  • demographics
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