The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates
on
the changes Change preposition
apply
of
British people Change preposition
in
Correct pronoun usage
who exchanged
exchanged
money Wrong verb form
exchanging
to
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for
beneficents
by Correct your spelling
benefits
age
range over a period of twenty Use synonyms
years
from 1990 to 2010.
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Overall
, the total spending of Linking Words
years
old Use synonyms
middle-
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middle-aged
age
accounted for the highest Use synonyms
percent
from 36-50 Replace the word
percentage
years
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and
accounting for 42% in 1990 and 35% in 2010, the data was higher than the Correct word choice
apply
year
old from 18-25 to 20%. Use synonyms
General
, each Change preposition
In general
age
group made up 18-25 Use synonyms
years
old, accounting for 5-17% from 1990 to 2010, Use synonyms
smallest
in the Correct article usage
the smallest
age
ranges on the chart. In all the Use synonyms
chart
in 1990, the total spending of Fix the agreement mistake
charts
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Correct article usage
the year
year old
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year-old
fluduated
again. Correct your spelling
fluctuated
Year
old from 26-35 was highest, at 30% per Use synonyms
year
, 22% higher than 1990. Use synonyms
Age
-old grand for 40%, the total Use synonyms
year
old 51-65 of Use synonyms
age
-old in 1990 to 35% and 2010 to 39%. People in their 40s, in 1990 Use synonyms
they
spent number money Correct pronoun usage
apply
humanity
because they Change preposition
on humanity
know
Wrong verb form
knew
this
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is
necessary for the future. People aged Wrong verb form
was
higher
65 or older Correct word choice
apply
compare
to Change the form of the verb
compared
year
old 51-65 spend money on charities Use synonyms
reduce
Wrong verb form
reduced
5
% in 1990 and Change preposition
by 5
reduce
Wrong verb form
reduced
10
% in 2010.
The Change preposition
by 10
years
old from 1990 and 2010 Use synonyms
to increase
in each Change the verb form
increased
age
group 36-Use synonyms
50
Add a hyphen
50-year-old
year
old tended old Use synonyms
age
and charities more than other ages.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, years, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 2 times.
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