The line graph shows the income of four cafes in New York last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph compares the

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of four coffee shops in New York over the

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of the previous year. All figures are shown in US dollars. It can be seen from the chart that the

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trend was upward, as the incomes for three of the four cafes increased during the

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.

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, there were dramatic rises for the ‘Wi-Fi Cafe’ (moving it 3rd to 1st place) and ‘Cafe Cool’,

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‘Internet Express’ demonstrated comparatively steady growth.

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, the

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for ‘The Tea Room’ plummeted, going from the highest to the lowest

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during the year. The Tea Room began the

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with the highest

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figure of $160,000 USD

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in January

. It experienced a clear steady decline despite some fluctuations, reaching $140,000 in October before dropping sharply to finish the

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with the lowest figure of $50,000 in December.

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, the Wi-Fi Cafe started in

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place with sales of only $50,000

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but rose steadily hitting $100,000 in July. Its

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dipped during

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September before figures soared, finishing up in December with the highest

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overall

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of $190,000. Moving on to Internet Express, there was a steady fall in the cafe’s

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in the first four months of the year, starting in January

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$95,000 and flattening out at around $80,000. It

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saw a recovery from August, to end the

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at $135,000.

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Cafe Cool fluctuated between $20,000 and $40,000 in the first six months before increasing more steadily to $60,000 in November, after which it witnessed a sudden upturn to finish at $120,000 dollars in December.