The provided bar chart depicts the changes in the percentage of overweight males and females in Australia over a thirty-year period, from 1980 to 2010.
The provided bar chart depicts the changes in the percentage of overweight males and females in Australia over a thirty-year period, from 1980 to 2010.
A glance at the chart reveals that
,
the data shows a rising trend in the percentage of stout individuals for both genders over the three decades.
In 1980, the proportion of corpulent Remove the comma
apply
men
in Australia was just below 50%, while
for women
it was around 30%. Over the following decade, the proportion of obese men
increased slightly to over 50%, whereas
women
experienced a significant rise to about 40%. By 2000, the fraction of plump men
peaked at close to 70% and remained stable until 2010.
Similarly
, the allotment pudgy
Change preposition
of pudgy
women
also
saw an increase, reaching over 50% in 2000 and near 60% in 2010. The data indicates a consistent upward trajectory in the prevalence of fat individuals, with women
consistently lower than men
throughout the observed period.Submitted by Shaxnoza on
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