The three pie charts illustrate how many hours spent in a library by undergraduate and postgraduates compared to the total student population at a university in Britain.
The three given pie charts show the amount of time that
undergraduates
and postgraduates
spent
in a library and the comparison between them and the total number of Wrong verb form
spend
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university's
students in Britain.
From an Change noun form
university
overall
perspective, it is evident that the majority of the undergraduates
spent 1 to 7 hours
and the minority of them spent more than 15 hours
. Meanwhile, the postgraduates
performed opposite
.
As can be seen in the total statistics, the percentage of pupils that spent 1 to 7 Correct article usage
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hours
was the highest, at 50%, the data for the group that spent 8 to 14 hours
was lower, at 35%. However
, the group that paid more than 15 hours
accounted for the lowest number, at only 15%.
Moreover
, the proportion of undergraduates
that spent 1 to 7 hours
and 8 to 14 hours
were 63% and 28%, respectively, compared to 17% and 32% in that of postgraduates
. In addition
, there was a significant gap in the amount of time that the undergraduates
and postgraduates
who
spent more than 15 Correct pronoun usage
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hours
at the library, which was 9% and 51%, respectively.Submitted by khoihoangtrong96 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words undergraduates, postgraduates, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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