The three pie charts illustrate how many hours spent in a library by undergraduate and postgraduates compared to the total student population at a university in Britain.

The three pie charts illustrate how many hours spent in a library by undergraduate and postgraduates compared to the total student population at a university in Britain.
The three given pie charts show the amount of time that
undergraduates
and
postgraduates
spent
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in a library and the comparison between them and the total number of
a
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university's
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students in Britain. From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that the majority of the
undergraduates
spent 1 to 7
hours
and the minority of them spent more than 15
hours
. Meanwhile, the
postgraduates
performed
opposite
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. As can be seen in the total statistics, the percentage of pupils that spent 1 to 7
hours
was the highest, at 50%, the data for the group that spent 8 to 14
hours
was lower, at 35%.
However
, the group that paid more than 15
hours
accounted for the lowest number, at only 15%.
Moreover
, the proportion of
undergraduates
that spent 1 to 7
hours
and 8 to 14
hours
were 63% and 28%, respectively, compared to 17% and 32% in that of
postgraduates
.
In addition
, there was a significant gap in the amount of time that the
undergraduates
and
postgraduates
who
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spent more than 15
hours
at the library, which was 9% and 51%, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words undergraduates, postgraduates, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • undergraduate
  • postgraduate
  • time brackets
  • library usage
  • total student population
  • correlation
  • patterns
  • comparison
  • study level
  • time spent
  • academic demands
  • research intensity
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