The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007.

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, in 1991, homeowners were the most popular type of housing, accounting for 60%, or more than over half of all homes. The next largest sector was socially rented homes, amounting to 23% or nearly one-third of shelters.

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, the remaining mansions were mostly privately rented (11%) with a tiny fraction being social housing (6%). Sixteen years later, in 2007, the number of homeowners had risen to 70%, or almost three-quarters of all homes.

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rented apartments, which had dropped from 23% to 17%.

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remained unchanged at 11%.

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, there were 5 million more resorts in 2007 compared with 1991 so the number of rented dormitories had increased despite the same percentage.

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, social housing has decreased three-fold from 6% in 1991 to 2% in 2007, and it remains the least popular type of housing.

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