The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph demonstrates the change in ownership of three different electrical appliances and the number of
hours
spent doing housework per week in one country between 1920 and 2019.
Overall
, it is clear that
usage of electrical appliances shows an upward trend from 1920 and 2019. Also
, the number of spending with
household chores Change preposition
on
was
recorded a downward trend during Unnecessary verb
apply
this
same period.
According to
the data about the percentage of households, the
notable change was recorded in refrigerators between 1920 and 1960. Correct article usage
a
This
appliance percentage rose dramatically from 2% in 1920 to 90% in 1960, became
from the Wrong verb form
becoming
last
popular appliance to the most popular one. On the other hand
, vacuum cleaners’ usage also
has increased. Lastly
, two of these appliances were recorded Correct pronoun usage
apply
both
at 100% in 2019.
Looking at the second graph in detail, one can see that the number of Correct pronoun usage
apply
hours
was
decreased from 50 Unnecessary verb
apply
hours
per week in 1920 to 20 hours
per week in 1960. The figures were fluctuated throughout the second half of the period. Finally
, it went to roughly 10 hours
in 2019.Submitted by kopopig on
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